Alamir | Nesa Miller
Torn from a life of childish innocence, fourteen-year-old Etain Rhys witnesses the brutal murder of her family. Running for her life, she inadvertently lands in the mystical realm of the Alamir, humans infused with powerful magic. No longer a child, she’s taken in by a small clan and learns their warrior ways. Moving up the ranks, the day comes when her chieftain tells her it’s time to move on.
Revenge for the murder of her family never far from her thoughts, she soon realizes it will take more than a sword and her newfound powers to track down their killer. Lord Darknight, the elusive chieftain of the LOKI clan, one of the most powerful in the Alamir, has connections that could aid her quest. A dangerous encounter with the warrior might prove advantageous – if she can survive him…and his dark secret.
Thanks to Anna, I’ve been able to see my manuscript through fresh eyes. Her feedback has helped me put on the final polish.
Jun 8 2017Nesa Miller
Project Name Alamir
Project Duration May 2017
Author/Client Nesa Miller
Length of manuscript 84,000 words approximately
The nature of the project Copyediting
How I managed my client’s expectations. Keeping the client fully abreast of progress throughout, I also picked up on plot and character inconsistencies as well as technical issues to do with weapons and armour.
Outcome of the project Title released
Additional flourish The author was extremely pleased with my work.